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and he keeps trying to help the rebellion and getting really angry when they do something stupid.

We all know those tired clichés. It’s time to kill them. Take one of them and turn them on their heads or at least these will hopefully keep the errors out of your writing. If you think of any other way to change them up go right ahead.

Her mind was an interesting place; it was where she kept her most beloved fantasies.

Her mind was an interesting place; it was where she kept her most beloved fantasies.

Doing this with Lydia! Choose a number and I'll answer in the comments!