The linework in this provides a great sense of direction and the different tones set the mood. I like the POV shots and the wide shots that set the location. Great detail on the faces too to convey emotion.
Composition by Kali Ciesemier. Sub lesson. Read, draw two quick pics one w/good composition one bad, pass to neighbor, must identify which is good and bad and explain why. Prize for most creative composition and best explanation.